... I'll be brief. There are two massive problems with your movie:
- The frame rate / aniamtion quality is terrible. It's jerky as hell and looks awful. If you're going to do frame-by-frame animation, you have to make sure that you include enough animation frames, otherwise it just looks bad.
- Length and story. The movie was both very short and boring. No story, just two poorly done deaths by a completly random main character. What's the point?
- Also, Madness clones? They've been done to death. If you want to make a good Madness clone, it has to have a lot of originality to work.
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... I'll be brief. There are two massive problems with your movie:
- The frame rate / aniamtion quality is terrible. It's jerky as hell and looks awful. If you're going to do frame-by-frame animation, you have to make sure that you include enough animation frames, otherwise it just looks bad.
- Length and story. The movie was both very short and boring. No story, just two poorly done deaths by a completly random main character. What's the point?
- Also, Madness clones? They've been done to death. If you want to make a good Madness clone, it has to have a lot of originality to work.
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